Hoehne is better than Trinidad.

Hoehne School District is in a better Community with a better school.[Thesis] Hoehne is better than Trinidad because it is safer, it has good sports programs, and Hoehne students have better overall test scores.

[Topic Sentence] At Hoehne one always feels safe. [SDS#1]Hoehne is equipped with surveillance cameras which monitor the school. [E#1]In fact just the other day someone got caught vandalizing the school.[SDS#2] The community of Hoehne is also much safer.[E#2]Hoehne, being in a rural community, has much less crime.[SDS#3]Plus the students in our school come from better families.[E#3] With better families you have a much better chance of having a good student and person.

[Topic Sentence]Hoehne is not just safer, but has a better sports program, we have good coaches and the kids work hard. [SDS#1]Hoehne’s coaches spend more time working on their team’s skills and reward their strengths. [E#1]Ms. Jones, for example, is always thinking of ways to help all the volleyball teams, not just the one she coaches.[SDS#2]Our kids also have strong points. They work hard in athletics and academics. [E#2]The athletes in our school work on academics do well in that. They also find time for sports. [SDS#3]With our coaches and kids working together to succeed we are successful. [E#3]This shows through our sports teams attitudes and also their sports records. Just look at the volleyball team who won state in both 2006 and 2007.


[Topic Sentence]Athletes in the school are not just the academic achievers, mostly the whole school is. [SDS#1]Hoehne test scores are very high. [E#1]One of the highest in Southern Colorado. [SDS#2]Also, most students graduate. [E#2] In fact about 94% of hoehne does.

So now you know that Hoehne is the obvious choice to take your kids. Being a better school. Seriously which would you choose?